I’m very glad to see this story is back and being regularly posted. Thank you!
Since you wrote:
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Readers, do let me know if you spot more errors before this gets archived!
I’ll mention a few things I noticed.
“on Gracechurch Street”
If you examine Jane Austen’s novels you’ll see that she doesn’t use the ‘on’ X Street phrasing. Instead, it’s always ‘in’ X Street.
“would ride in the Bennet’s worn carriage or the Gardiner’s”
“the Gardiner’s borrowed carriage and the Bennet’s family carriage”
In the above lines, you’ve used singular possessive where plural possessive is meant.
“the ladies in the foyer”
Foyer did not have the meaning of entrance hall until 1859.
I’m looking forward to chapter 19. It should be a good one!
