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Re: A Kindly Aunt 63, 64, 65 - Complete - 3 years ago
Nice! Thank you.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: A Kindly Aunt 61 & 62 - 3 years ago
Just lovely how everything is progressing! Thank you so much!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Circles - Chapter 3 - 3 years ago
Wonderful story! You can just feel all the emotions playing-- the conversations and situation so vivid!! Thank you!!!!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Backstage at Pride and Prejudice - 3 years ago
LOL!! Love it! Thank you.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: An Unpopular Notion Chapters 33 and 34 - 3 years ago
Wonderful! I am so excited to see more of this story!!! But what a cliffhanger you have left us with! Please tell us you will post again soon. Thank you.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Miss Jane Fairfax In Her Dotage. Chapter 1 and 2 - 3 years ago
Oh, this seems to be heading to such sadness! Poor Jane!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: A Kindly Aunt 57 & 58 - 3 years ago
You are welcome. I am glad to be of help, but do not ever want to be a pest. Thanks for any additional dialogue between D & E. So looking forward to it.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: A Kindly Aunt 57 & 58 - 3 years ago
Some great conversations here, although I wouldn't mind a bit more conversations between D & E on their wedding plans and sharing thoughts! Can't get enough, I guess. I thank you! I am hesitant to again point out something, so I apologize in advance, but here it is. I believe that in Chapter 58 the following sentence has the first phrasing with a positive meaning, when I think you meant aby EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: A Kindly Aunt 55 & 56 - 3 years ago
Just glad to be of help and not be a nuisance pointing out things.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: A Kindly Aunt 55 & 56 - 3 years ago
Lovely update on our favorite couples! I am wondering if Lady C will come to cause trouble! Many possibilities!!!!!! BTW, In Chapter 55. I was confused by what you mean in the following sentence, wondering if maybe a word was left out that would make it clearer about Sir James; I underlined the phrasing that confused me: "I know the Stevensons usually get away to South Park, but they were nby EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: A Kindly Aunt 53 & 54 - 3 years ago
I think it really made the difference for Darcy that he finally saw her in Derbyshire at Pemberley; there's nothing like seeing someone and how they would fit in your home! Love it!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: A Kindly Aunt 53 & 54 - 3 years ago
Just lovely!! I love how Darcy was so happily surprised by Elizabeth moving things forward so quickly. Thank you!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Men and Boys - A Pride and Prejudice One Shot (complete) - 3 years ago
Very enjoyable!!! Thank you!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: A Kindly Aunt 51 & 52-mods-correction? - 3 years ago
You are most welcome! Glad to be of help.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: A Kindly Aunt 51 & 52 - 3 years ago
Thank you! Finally Darcy is opening his eyes and coming to know his own heart! BTW, not sure if the following has a typo, or this is what you meant to write; it is in the last paragraph of Chapter 51: "As Mary lay away for a time..." Did you mean "awake" there? Thanks again for sharing your story!!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: A Kindly Aunt 49 & 50 - 3 years ago
Thank you for a lovely chapter! I look forward to Darcy coming to know how perfect Elizabeth is for him and how he should not wait as he had thought to do or he may lose out.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: A Kindly Aunt 47 & 48 - 3 years ago
Hmmm. Elizabeth may only be 17, but time flies, and if Darcy doesn't show her some interest, she will be snapped up way before his sister is out of his house. Poor Darcy, trying to put it off as long as possible, and poor Lizzy with knowing her feelings for him and thinking them futile! How many more chapters did you say we have in this volume? Thanks!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: A Kindly Aunt 45 & 46 - 3 years ago
Hmmm, developing most nicely. I am wondering if, once he sees her in his home at Pemberley, it will truly occur to Darcy how he feels about her then.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 42-epilogue! - 3 years ago
Absolutely wonderful story!!! Congratulations! You did it: you posted the last part before Christmas, at least for some of us anyway. Thank you again and again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 41 - 3 years ago
Just wonderful that his sight is coming back! Thank you so much for this wonderful story! I can just feel our HEA coming! Can't wait! Thank you!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 40 - 3 years ago
Oh, my, congratulations on your publication so close, just around the corner!! And thank you so much for sharing this with us!!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 38-39 - 3 years ago
Thank you! Your story is such a gift!!!!!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Lady Catherine Disposes - Part VI (Final) - 3 years ago
Thank you so much for this fun story! I giggled a lot through it, and that doesn't happen very often.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 36-37 - 3 years ago
I knew Mrs. Knightley would be up to more her tricks, but E can't go... Not now...by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: A Kindly Aunt 41 & 42 - 3 years ago
Ooh, Lizzy is going to Derbyshire with Jane and Bingley. Wonderful!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Looking for few readers to read WHOLE manuscript within next 2 days.... - 3 years ago
As I am retired now, I can certainly make the time. Just let me know.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 35 - 3 years ago
Whoa! You certainly keep us in suspense of how a HEA is to be obtained. You can't let Elizabeth leave, you just can't! (Do I sound whiney and begging enough? bg) Your writing, just mmmmmmm good and exquisitely torturous!!! So glad Sarah is her own woman, as there were certainly times when I thought she would cave to her grandmother, although I knew our hero wouldn't. Thank you again for sharinby EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 32-34 - 3 years ago
My husband just pointed out to me (don't know why I didn't think of it myself) that you successfully inserted a pond/wet shirt scene with D & E into your story! LOLby EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 32-34 - 3 years ago
Wow! So many changes for Darcy! Makes so much sense that his experience in that battle would be what was haunting him, keeping him from hearing! Terrific pond scene!! This is such a great story on so many levels! Thank you! Can hardly wait for more!!!!!!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 29-31 - 3 years ago
Thank you! I just love your writing. Wow! Thank goodness for Lizzy's great timing and her realization of how much he needs her and no one else can fill the role with her skills (and of course her caring and knowledge of him). And thank goodness for the Colonel's letter and the other note! I knew that dog could be a great friend to our hero, and now I'm wondering when they started training dogsby EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild