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Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 11 - 9 months ago
Absolutely WOW!!! I love it! Thank you for a terrific chapter, even though you left us such an abrupt ending; but you did give warning, and I thank you for that. Just love that way Darcy and Lizzy met!!!!!! Can't wait for the next installment! Awesome job!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 10 - 9 months ago
Thank you so much for the extra info and for clarifying it all. So appreciated!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 10 - 9 months ago
Thank you for pointing that out! Guess I didn't read closely enough even on my re-read!!. Thanks again. Makes perfect sense.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 10 - 9 months ago
Quick question: When Darcy sees Bingley in May, he reminds Bingley that they will meet up in Meryton in 4 months; but the last part of this chapter has Darcy's party going to Meryton in June. Is that what you intend for them: to be there in Meryton for the whole summer before the Bingleys arrive at Netherfield Hall? Thanks for clarification, as I am not sure if I reading this right or misunderstby EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 10 - 9 months ago
Boy, what gall the Bingleys have! And then there's the other awful relatives - wanting his mother to come "home" because his wife doesn't want to visit the tenants, etc. You write horrible people very well! Thank you for giving us another chapter. I very much look forward to your postings!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 9 - 9 months ago
You're welcome. Thanks again for your story!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 9 - 9 months ago
Just really enjoying this story! Thank you so much!! FYI: This phrase: "gentile young lady" should be "genteel young lady". Hope you don't mind. Thanks!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: The Education of a Chaperon - Chapter X - 9 months ago
I'm waiting to see if Caroline makes things worse or if she really will help them. She certainly sees herself as the one to save them all and steer them in the direction they need to go, but I'm not quite buying it or her, or at the least I am taking a wait-and-see attitude. Thank your for sharing your story!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 8 - 9 months ago
I am loving this story! Thank you so much for all your hard work on this! It is appreciated. We will all wait with bated breath for your next post. Thank you again for a great original story!!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 7 - 9 months ago
Oh, what a tangled web! What fun! Great job twisting around the plot, making it more and more interesting, and great job with how you set up their "false trails" to keep everything under wraps!! Enjoying this very very much. Thank you.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 6 - 10 months ago
I am enjoying this so much. So looking forward to your posts! Thank you again.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Corona Chronicles - 10 months ago
Hilarious start! Can't wait to see what you do with this! Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 5 - 10 months ago
Just loving it! Thank you!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 4 - 10 months ago
Enjoying your story very much! Thank you!!!!!!!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: The Education of a Chaperon - Chapter VIII - 10 months ago
Poor Darcy! Always likes to be so precise and complete in his work, to forget an important requirement! Tsk Tsk! And how odd; does he have something or someone distracting him? Teeheeby EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 3 - 10 months ago
Love how this is progressing. Can't wait for more. Thank you!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: The Education of a Chaperon - Chapter VI - 10 months ago
Wow! Such an assertive Jane! I believe that when it comes to Bingley in particular, she will take no nonsense. My, my, the truth come out on Lucy Steele in a very big way.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: In a Prudential Light, Part 2 Chapter 8 - 10 months ago
Thank you for this new chapter.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: The Education of a Chaperon - Chapter V - 11 months ago
This is giving me lots of chuckles! Look forward to what you have in store for us. Thank you!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Caroline's Tea (One shot, fluff) - 1 year ago
Enjoyed that very much! Just a minor comment which I hope will not give offense: the title of Ms. did not exist until just a few decades ago. Before it was always Miss or Mrs.(short for Missus); and just like Mr. is short for Mister. Hope that's helpful. Thank you for the story! Always love to see Caroline get what she deserves. And absolutely love you putting Anne "Elizabeth" in as you did!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Pride and Petticoat - 1 year ago
Sweet!!! Enjoyed this very much! Thank you.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Lady Agnes - December Short Story - One Shot - 1 year ago
Thank you! Enjoyed this so much! Wonderful how Darcy can be teased by his aunt and others! Hope you decide to take this a bit further. Awesome beginning to something very special, I think!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Carrie-Sue (Part 2) - 1 year ago
I remember this from before. Cannot remember well enough to know what you changed, but enjoyed reading it all the same!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Little Town of Highbury ???? - 1 year ago
Thank you! I enjoyed this very much.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: A good cup of tea – September Short Story Topic – One Shot - 1 year ago
Lovely! Really enjoyed this! Very well done! I would just say that it is best to start a new paragraph when you change who is speaking, and you had one paragraph which switched to at least 3 speakers or their thoughts, so you may want to separate them a little, as it does make it easier to follow the conversation. If I am out of line with that, do ignore me, please!!! Other than that, bravo!!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Harriet’s Dilemma –September Short Story Topic – One Shot - 1 year ago
Well done! You had me thinking in a completely different direction with the name Harriet Smith!! Very effective writing, so it's very hard to believe that this is your first work. I hope you keep writing and I will be looking for your next work with great anticipation. Thank you so much for sharing this!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Consequences of a call - One Shot - September short story - 1 year ago
Intriguing! Can't wait to see where you take this! Thank you for sharing it!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Looking for a book... - 1 year ago
Yes, that's it exactly!! Thank you so much!!!by EvelynJean - Tea Room
Looking for a book... - 1 year ago
I am trying to remember a book with the storyline that Darcy and Mr. Collins were both hit by the same lightning bolt, and they switched bodies. And during the time that Darcy was in Collins' body, he became engaged to Lizzy, but they were switched back before a wedding. I cannot even remember the author's name. I remember it being very well written, great story. Any help is appreciated! Thank youby EvelynJean - Tea Room