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Re: Beyond Longbourn by Peter - 2 years ago

Thank you so much for the info on Peter. And I do apologize that I apparently posted my question in the wrong place! Thank you for your patience.
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Kindly Relations Chapters 25 and 26 - 2 years ago

Oops, I think I got the Marys mixed up there with who has plans to visit Bath regularly. Oh well.
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Kindly Relations Chapters 25 and 26 - 2 years ago

Thank you for the new chapters! About Mary Elliot, I thought maybe when they visit Bath, she could meet up with Lady Russell there, too, to further their relationship. Thanks again.
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Beyond Longbourn by Peter - 2 years ago

Thank you so much for the info. I do hope he is okay. Thanks again.
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Beyond Longbourn by Peter - 2 years ago

Does anyone know if Peter will be continuing his story: Beyond Longbourn ?? I have so enjoyed this story so far and hope he is able to give us more chapters soon. I hope everything is all right with him and send my best wishes!
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Kindly Relations Chapters 23 and 24 - 2 years ago

Oh, I am so happy for Anne, but especially pleased for Major Fitzwilliam and Charlotte! Also, so glad for the families to know the truth about Willoughby; what a cad!! Poor Marianne certainly had to learn the truth the hard way. Thank you!
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Kindly Relations Chapters 21 and 22 - 2 years ago

Continuing to enjoy your story very much; how you weave the characters into each other's lives keeps me guessing what is next. Thank you!
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Kindly Relations Chapters 19 and 20 - 2 years ago

Very Interesting developments. Thank you!
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Kindly Relations Chapters 17 and 18 - 2 years ago

Yes, very interesting how you have tied in so many of JA's characters. Looking forward to all the places you will take us with this. Thank you.
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Kindly Relations Chapters 15 and 16 - 2 years ago

Thank you so much for your regular posting. Still, I will say more, please!!
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Kindly Relations Chapters 13 and 14 - 2 years ago

Thank you. Enjoying this very much and very interested in where you are taking us, right now particularly with Mrs. Bennet.
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Kindly Relations Chapters 11 and 12 - 2 years ago

Thank you, thank you, thank you!! Enjoying it very much.
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Kindly Relations Chapters 9 and 10 - 2 years ago

I did find your original "A Kindly Aunt" mostly in 2016 postings. I have almost finished re-reading it, as I did read it back then, and I am now connecting with the events in your "Kindly Relations" much better. Thank you so much for this story.
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Kindly Relations Chapters 9 and 10 - 2 years ago

Enjoying your story very much. Sorry to be so quiet, but have a lot going on right now. But please know that I really am enjoying your story as I am able to log on.
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: In a Prudential Light, Part II, Chapter 1 - 2 years ago

Whoa! Can hardly wait to see where you take this. Thanks!
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: In a Prudential Light, Chapter 7 - 2 years ago

Thank you!
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: In a Prudential Light, Chapter 7 - 2 years ago

Whoa!! Very effective writing!! What a chapter and what a place to leave us! I hope you won't have to leave us to wait so long for the next; I had to go back to find and read your previous chapters. Cannot wait for more. What a predicament you have put ODC in!! Oh my! Don't know how you can resolve this very easily! Please warn me if you do not have a happy ending. Thank you.
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: The Assembly Ch 3 & Epilogue - 2 years ago

Nice!! Enjoyed it very much! Thank you!!!
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: The Curse Chapter 23 - 2 years ago

Thank you for a terrific chapter!!
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: A Circumstance of Tolerable Similarity Chapter 15 and Epilogue (Final) - 2 years ago

I have really enjoyed your story! Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Also, you are very welcome; I am so glad the suggestions were not offensive to you. If you ever wish for someone to look over your work, I have done it for someone who actually published, and it was a real pleasure for me to be of help, as I am recently retired. Best wishes to you on any future projects, too!!
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: A Circumstance of Tolerable Similarity Chapters 12-14 (Post 5) - 2 years ago

Thank you! I think you did an outstanding job, it was not too "angsty" in my opinion, and those who are familiar with Elizabeth Gaskell's North and South will know just how well you handled it. Great job! BTW, you do not need a period after Miss because it is the full word, not like Mrs. which is abbreviated from "Missus" or Mr. which is abbreviated from "Mister". Hope that is helpful. Thanks a
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: A Circumstance of Tolerable Similarity Chapters 10-12 (Post 4) - 2 years ago

Just loving your story! Regarding the Navy and how it handled mutineers, I have always read that, in those times at least, they were never sympathetic to any mutineers no matter how mean, awful, or crazy the captain was known to be; so I don't see how our dear Wentworth would be able to be of much help. But I could be wrong as to the influence of a highly respected and honored Naval officer. But
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Tales of HMS Laconia, Part 4 of 4 (COMPLETE) - 2 years ago

Oh, Jack, thank you for the "tales"! I will certainly look for your new book to come out!
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: A Circumstance of Tolerable Similarity Chapters 7-9 (Post 3) - 2 years ago

Just wonderful! You've done a great job weaving the Wentworths into things into the lives of the Hales and Thorntons!!! Looking forward to more. Thank you!
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: A Circumstance of Tolerable Similarity Chapters 4-6 (Post 2) - 2 years ago

Just love it! Thanks so much for this blend of Persuasion and North and South. I'm looking forward to the rest so very much. Thank you.
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: The Curse Chapter 22 - 2 years ago

Thank you for a great and astonishing chapter! You really had me worried with the fight between Darcy and his cousin! Very effective writing! Now how much longer do we have to wait for Darcy to get his courage up to tell Lizzy how he feels? Great stuff! Thank you!
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Tales of HMS Laconia, Part 3 of 4 - 2 years ago

HA HA HA! Just great how you described the scrub!!! Thank you!
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: A Circumstance of Tolerable Similarity Chapters 1-3 (Post 1) - 2 years ago

Just loving this!! I love both books, too! Thank you so much!
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Tales of HMS Laconia, Part 2 of 4 - 2 years ago

Just Awesome, Jack! You had me on pins and needles a few times there! Can't wait for more. Thank you
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Tales of HMS Laconia, Part 1 of 4 - 2 years ago

Awesome, Jack!!! You sure can tell a story full of action so very well! Thank you! Looking forward to more.
by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
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