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Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves - Epilogue - 4 months ago
Thank you for all your work on this story. What a treat!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapter 51 - 4 months ago
Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. I have so looked forward to each posting and will certainly miss it. I hope you continue writing stories. Thank you again!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapter 49 - 4 months ago
I so look forward to each chapter to your story! Thank you for all your time put into it.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapter 48 - 5 months ago
Wow! Loved your setdown from Elizabeth to Miss Bingley! Well done! Loving your story so much. Thank you!!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapters 42-43 - 6 months ago
Great story! But where is the 4th bandit?!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapters 40-41 - 6 months ago
Awesome story! Can hardly wait for your next chapters.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapters 26-28 - 7 months ago
Thank you for the feedback on my comments on the periods. That motivated me to look it up, and you are correct as I found out it is not a British practice. I am glad to learn something and now wonder how it began to be used here, so I hope to find info on that. Thank you.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapters 26-28 - 7 months ago
Thank you so much for more chapters of your story! I watch for each of your posts, enjoying your story very much. Puzzled: I have noticed quite a few people using Mr. or Mrs. without the period, but these are abbreviations so they need the period, otherwise, you should type out Missus or Mister. This is meant as a help, not criticism.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapter 24 - 8 months ago
I am enjoying your story very much and can hardly wait for the next chapters! Thank you for sharing your story with us.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Looking for another story - 8 months ago
On Kindle "Promises" by Wendi Sotisby EvelynJean - Tea Room
Re: Looking for another story - 8 months ago
I found it and my version on Kindle is "Promises" by Wendi Sotis. Thanks so much for your help!by EvelynJean - Tea Room
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapters 13-17 - 8 months ago
Love this story! Can hardly wait for more. Thank you.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Looking for another story - 9 months ago
A story from I think quite a while back has been sticking in my mind, but can't remember exact title. It starts out with Darcy & Elizabeth being friends from an early age as their fathers are best friends. Elizabeth is I think just 15 when Darcy proposes while the Bennets are visiting at Pemberley, but the dads want them to wait of course, so they are separated being at their respective homes.by EvelynJean - Tea Room
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapter 12 - 9 months ago
Thank you! What a wonderful conversation with our dear couple. Thank you for this great story. I will count the days until your next posting.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapters 11 - 9 months ago
Can't wait for your next posting. I want more, more and more!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Looking for a story - 9 months ago
Need the title of a story about Darcy being so tired and depressed that he decides to leave his riches and go where nobody knows him, and ends up with a job at Longbourn, working in the yard/gardener, and even in their spare time teaching the servants there to read and write. Thank youby EvelynJean - Tea Room
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapters 9-10 - 9 months ago
Oh my! Your writing keeps me on the edge of my seat. I wait on pins and needles for each new posting. Thank you so much for sharing your story with us! Yay, Lizzy! And Darcy! Great scene with Lady Eleanor.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapters 6-8 - 9 months ago
You sure have me on pins and needles waiting to see what happens next! Wow!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapters 3-5 - 10 months ago
Oh, I can hardly wait until your next chapters! What an awesome start to your story!!!!!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapters 3-5 - 10 months ago
I agree with you on all, especially the Gardiner children- heartbreaking!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapters 3-5 - 10 months ago
Wow! Great writing! I'm on the edge of my seat and can hardly wait for more. Thank you for sharing your story.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves - 10 months ago
Wow! What a start, but poor Mr. Gardiner & the children! Can hardly wait to see where you take this!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Her Own Insignificance -Epilogue - 1 year ago
But perhaps I am the only one who had that problem I mentioned!by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Her Own Insignificance -Epilogue - 1 year ago
Thank you for a wonderful story! I did find the epilogue a bit confusing with the time allotted between letters/updates, but I finally think I figured it out: that each grouping of time was the amount of years from the start of the epilogue -- is that right? As otherwise the time between updates would have been too many years gone by? I would have found it much easier to figure out if you justby EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Looking for a Story, fairly short tale of D & E: - 1 year ago
Found it! Thank you!by EvelynJean - Tea Room
Re: Her Own Insignificance Chapters 12-15 - 1 year ago
Just loving it! BTW the spelling of the word fiance is for men and fiancee for women. Thank you again for this lovely story.by EvelynJean - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Looking for a Story, fairly short tale of D & E: - 1 year ago
Story is about Darcy receiving info from his attorney that he will lose Pemberly if he does not marry by a certain date very near, and that the estate will go to a Darcy cousin who he knows is a wastrel, and the letter supposedly signed by his father is a recent find. He convinces Elizabeth to marry him, but the attorney accuses him of lying, etc. and Elizabeth figures out what's going on.by EvelynJean - Tea Room
Re: looking for a story - 1 year ago
"A Baby for Mr. Darcy" by J Dawn King Great story!!!by EvelynJean - Tea Room