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Loved it! Well done, me lady!by Karentea - A Novel Idea
Another fantastic adventure! I love your style... makes for entertaining but informative stories!by Karentea - A Novel Idea
Holofernese?? LOL! Is that actually a legitimate name? Loved the story! Well done, as always. Thank you!by Karentea - A Novel Idea
I know you won't have time to do edits for a bit, but I do have one more blooper to bring to your notice: “Oh, in case the storm is worse further north?” asked Dinah. “That too, but mostly because sailors are superstitious, and don’t like to sail on a Friday. They say it’s bad luck,” said Dinah -- I believe you meant Val. “How do they manage when at sea when Friday comes round? You can’t anchorby Karentea - A Novel Idea
... is that in section V, Georgiana and Tye are only 5 years apart, where in Beautiful Friendship, they are 8 years apart.... (he was 21 when he met her, age 13). And then in the Ten Years Later segment, they are only 6 years apart...by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Such beautiful vignettes that give us a peak into the life of the Darcys. Thank you for sharing your beautiful storytelling with us. Can I point out a couple things...? In V. with “This is a conversation between you and I, Georgie,” Will told Georgie... I believe it should say: "...between you and me..."?? Then again, it does sound okay the way it is... And in VI., ...who could meet Will and Elby Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
This so-called modern day spin was unrecognizable as the Pride & Prejudice as we know it. It was basically a piece of fluff that borrowed a couple names, a line or two, and maybe 2-3 ideas from Jane Austen.by Karentea - Tea Room
I watched it today. It wasn't bad... I think the actor that played Darcy was more convincing than the actress that played Elizabeth. But overall, it was a nice piece of fluff!by Karentea - Tea Room
Awwwwww......by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Thank you so much. I so appreciate it when you post the next chapter!by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
i always harboured suspicions of Sapper.... (See, I used a 4-dot ellipsis!)by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Why is Elizabeth embarrassed about birthing? She seems unduly so in light of the fact that she has seen some dreadful battle injuries on men. I am pretty certain that due to certain injuries,men's privates weren't always covered during surgery. She is unaffected by blood and gore, but she is afftected by a woman birthing? If she hopes to be a doctor, she has to be unembarrassed about all aspects oby Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
...according to the following excerpt from the middle of chapter 16, I thought Darcy looked to it for the time of day a courier would arrive: He glimpsed the windmill out of his window. Ah! The courier was coming tomorrow. The report on safety pins could wait.by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
...perhaps one is being mistaken for the other. Maybe "Two-T" is the spy!by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
If Elizabeth is a as sheltered as you suggest, I would think that the gruesome injuries would have more of an affect on her, whether the war has sunk in or not. It is not like she was "eased" into it...by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
I am trying to find that story where Darcy is gravely ill, and Elizabeth is called to his side. He recovers and keeps her scented handkerchief... Sorry that's all I remember.by Karentea - Tea Room
Thank you, Jack. I really enjoyed Darcy's POV.by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
I can't believe this is coming to an end! I have enjoyed this so much. Thank you. Heads up: serious has been spelled without an i a few times...by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Loved this story. I am so glad you had a back-up! And I am happy that nothing incredibly dreadful happened Imogen. Please, what is a skeleton suit?by Karentea - A Novel Idea