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When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter 17 - 3 months ago
The epilogue will post next week. Chapter 17 The following morning was beautiful with clear skies and gentle warmth, a rare gift in London’s damp embrace. The Fitzwilliam party, along with the Bennets, took the opportunity to walk out to Hyde Park. The park was in full splendor. Lawns bright, gravel walks alive with every color of the season. A veritable parade of riders, carriages, and stroby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter 16 - 3 months ago
This got way too long, so I had to split the chapter into two. Depending on how long they end up being, I may post Chapter 17 and the epilogue next week. Chapter 16 The morning light, though attempting to be cheerful, struggled to penetrate the heavy damask curtains of Lady Catherine de Bourgh’s breakfast parlour. A fire crackled merrily in the hearth, chasing away the lingering chill of dawnby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter 15 - 3 months ago
Chapter 15 As the music drew to a close and the dancers returned to their circles, Mary found herself once again beside Elizabeth and Jane. The air was fragrant with summer roses and the warmth of perfume, the candlelight gilding every polished surface and pearl. Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth lingered slightly apart from the others, speaking in quiet tones that, while not secretive, discouraged interrby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter 14 - 3 months ago
Chapter 14 The next morning, London summoned forth the distinguished party from Lady Catherine’s townhouse, all eager to take advantage of the fine spring weather with a promenade through Hyde Park. The air was crisp, sweetened by recent rain and the scent of budding leaves, a welcome contrast to the usual clamor of the city streets. Mary Bennet, walking just behind the principal party, surveyedby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter 13 - 3 months ago
Chapter 13 The conversation had turned to lighter topics, laughter and easy chatter filling the parlour. Mr. Darcy sat beside Elizabeth on a settee, their proximity a quiet testament to their growing understanding. Jane and Michael were equally close, their hands occasionally brushing, a silent language passing between them, a joy that settled deep in Jane’s heart. Jane had just begun to feel thby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter 12 - 3 months ago
I don’t know if this needs a trigger warning or not, so better safe than sorry. Someone will be kidnapped, and the aftereffects of a slight beating will be described, but not in great detail. It’s all done quickly and is mostly dialogue. Chapter 12 Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy walked side by side along the winding paths at the far edge of the Longbourn garden, the air cool and fragrant with the sby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter 11 - 4 months ago
Chapter 11 As the party in Meryton dispersed, Richard Fitzwilliam, Colonel Fitzwilliam once more, tightened his grip on Wickham’s arm and steered him toward the militia barracks with Parker at his side. He could feel Denny and Thorne follow in strained silence and trusted Michael and William were trailing the group. The sense of purpose, of grim satisfaction, was pain to be felt. At the barracksby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter 10 - 4 months ago
I am currently writing the climax to my next story and figured a bonus post was appropriate. This chapter ends in a good place, but I would be left wondering what happens next and wouldn’t want to wait a week. Chapter 10 The weekend that followed the Bingleys’ dramatic exit unfolded with a calm wholly unforeseen, allowing new currents to flow through Longbourn. Mary, ever the keen observerby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter 9 - 4 months ago
Thank you. I have fixed this in my Word document.by LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter 9 - 4 months ago
I was on vacation last week and my great-niece gave me a lovely cold. Apologies if I missed any errors. Chapter 9 Mary enjoyed the morning sunlight as it streamed through the windows of the Longbourn parlour, and casted a golden glow over the assembled party as they lingered after breaking their fast. The room buzzed with quiet conversation and the occasional burst of laughter, the air filledby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter 8 - 4 months ago
It doesn’t matter how many times I read the chapters, I continuously think of ways to make adjustments. Please forgive any errors my fiddling has caused. Chapter 8 Later that afternoon, Mr. Bennet sat in his study, joined by Mr. Jones, an old friend whose concern for the Bennet girls was as deep as for his own family. The Earl of Matlock, who had lingered after the earlier discussion, now ocby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter 7 - 4 months ago
I decided to post another chapter this week because I have almost 60k words of my next book written. Depending on how early I wake up, I have been writing before work, during my lunch, and afterwards. It’s amazing how much more I seem to accomplish when I break it up instead of trying to write for an hour or two a day all at once. The viscount doesn’t want Miss Bingley to know who the Fitzwilliamby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter 6 - 4 months ago
Chapter 6 The Honorable Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam rode hard from the moment he left the barracks, having received news from Parker too astonishing to credit. There had been no question, no hesitation. He had changed into his traveling clothes, left his regiment, his orders, and even his supper untouched. Duty, discipline, every ingrained habit of a soldier, all forgotten in the face of this impby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter 5 - 5 months ago
I will start posting once a week on Sunday’s. We start to hear Jimmy’s story in this chapter and more in the next. Chapter 5 Elizabeth Bennet and her sister Mary sat together in the parlour at Longbourn, awaiting Mr. Hill’s return from London with Mrs. Walters. Her father was in his study, her mother and Jane had departed for Meryton to honour their prior engagement with her Aunt Phillips, andby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter - 5 months ago
I noticed a typo and can't edit what I posted. If William is indeed smitten with a Bennet daughter, I confess I harbour the hope I might at last find someone I am able to trust with my heart, enough to fall in love and offer for he.” That should be offer for her.by LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter - 5 months ago
After this chapter, I will start posting weekly. Probably Sunday mornings. Chapter 4 “Would it surprise you to hear that in some ways you remind me of my father?” Mr. Darcy asked. Mary ceased laughing at once and turned to Mr. Darcy, who nodded gravely before continuing. “You are one of the few people who have taken me to task and compelled me to reconsider my actions. That it should occurby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter 3 - 5 months ago
Chapter 3 As he spurred Achilles to follow Bingley, William absently noticed the young soldier who had brought their horses stood frozen, mouth agape. The militia, encamped on the edge of Meryton, had chosen a wide, open field. The openness made it easier for William to follow Bingley’s horse in the poor light, once his eyes had adjusted after a brilliant flash of lightning. He lost sight of thby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand Chapter 2 - 5 months ago
Chapter 2 Mary, Elizabeth, and Jane stood quietly outside the closed parlour door. “What do you suppose my parents are speaking about?” Elizabeth whispered. “Why is it taking so very long?” “I cannot answer either question, Lizzy,” Jane whispered back. “We were bid to wait here and that is precisely what we shall do.” “I am grateful they appear to be speaking civilly to each other. Perhaps theby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
When Mary Bennet Takes a Stand (PIP) Chapter 1 - 5 months ago
Summary: When Mary Bennet declares, “Jane must take the coach!”, Longbourn’s rhythms are upended. As her mother’s schemes and Lydia’s recklessness court scandal, Mary demands order and justice, much to the shock of everyone who ever thought her merely bookish. From the hearthside dramas of Hertfordshire to the glittering ballrooms of London, alliances shift, loyalties are tested, and Mary findsby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: I wish for more - 7 months ago
Anmaon, I hadn't intended Practicing Economy to be extended, but it could be done and already have a number of ideas running through my head. I currently have one story with almost 25k words written that I haven't touched in two months and another one has 12k written that I haven't touched in four years. The are 4 other basic plot outlines drafted. I am going to be an empty nester soon, hopefullby LizzyS - Tea Room
Re: Will there be a continuation on Even more consequense from a call? - 3 years ago
Sorry for the long delay in responding. The beginning of the year was crazy, mother broke her leg, basketball and volleyball at the same time, I switched departments at work, etc. This is the first time I have logged into fanfiction in months. Not sure if I will go back to EMCFAC. I have about 23k typed up of a Jane doesn’t go to Netherfield and Darcy/Bingley are the ones to get caught in the raiby LizzyS - Tea Room
Re: good stories - 4 years ago
Sorry for the late response. A few of my favorites: Connections Redux Caprice and Instability The Chase Is On There are also two stories on ff.net by LadyJaeza that I absolutely love. Giving Consequence and the companion piece and sequel Miss York's Match. Both books by themselves are rather long.by LizzyS - Tea Room
Re: Stories with bad Jane, bad Mrs Bennet... - 4 years ago
You can look on the JAFFIndex under the bad Jane category. http://jaffindex.com/ I don't know what the Dwiggie password is, but at the top of the screen, you should see a JAFF Library link. JAFF Library and it might be in there somewhere.by LizzyS - Tea Room
Re: Looking for a story... - 4 years ago
It sounds kind of like Mr. Darcy - A Man of Honour that was originally posted on ff.net by Jadie47, although I thought Jane was engaged to Darcy and eloped with Bingley and Darcy and Lizzy gave chance. It appears to be published on Amazon by Jadie Brooks.by LizzyS - Tea Room
Re: A Clever Plan - 4 years ago
I took two weeks of vacation in July and this is the first time I have had a chance to check Dwiggie. I was very glad to see you writing again. Is the longer story you are working on the P&P one you started in 2016? If it is, and the google docs link is still valid, I would be happy to re-read and offer insight.by LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Practicing Economy - One Shot - 4 years ago
I hope he would get a commission, although being the good businessman that he is, he probably feels it's to his own benefit to make the Bennet family as much money as possible so he doesn't potentially end up supporting an extra six people.by LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Practicing Economy - One Shot - 4 years ago
I loathe apostrophes, always have. Microsoft Word, Google Docs, and whatever software this website uses tend to disagree on what word needs something. Oh well. The idea came to me when I was walking to my car after stopping into work for something one morning, I let it take shape overnight, and I typed it up during lunch the next day. It was only read once or twice and not beta'd. I am glad youby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Practicing Economy - One Shot - 4 years ago
I wrote this a few months ago for the May/June Nobody’s Perfect challenge on another site. If you read it at AHA, it’s the same story. When I was doing research for my previous forays into writing, I found myself in some older conversation threads on another site and one such conversation stuck with me. This is my take on the Bennet women being moochers, I included Mrs. Bennet in my scheme eby LizzyS - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Question about Lise’s story - 4 years ago
I am sorry, I don't typically read non P&P fanfiction. The JAFFindex says: Categories: Radically altered meetings and developments Other humourous tales Prequels Pregnancies prior to marriage Extracting someone from a predicament Earlier resolution for hero and heroine Considering it has a humourous tales and extracting someone from a predicament categories, I wouldby LizzyS - Tea Room