Wow! What a full chapter! And somehow I felt that Juliana's father would give more trouble!! Is she of age, and if so, they may be able to get a license to marry right away; and she could also stay with the Darcys where her father shouldn't be able to find her??? Can't wait for your next chapter and the one after that, etc.
Thank you so much for sharing this story! I also think you should publish this story! If you ever need an editor, I have helped with a final edit on a book that was published; and it was so much fun!