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Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 23

September 12, 2020 06:55AM
Of course you write the story you want to write, and I think there is a large readership who likes to read about the Bingley's getting knocked down a peg - that was no criticism.
I just think that even in the transformation of Hurst you have lots and lots of little digs at his in-laws - how they made his life hell, and basically how it's all their fault that he was such a lazy drunkard slob. Of course you need an event to shake him out of that and it makes it easier to show his transformation if you can just blame it on the Bingleys and say he is totally different away from them. But the end result is a lot of Bingley bashing. Again, no criticism, just what this story feels like for me as a reader. Looking forward to the surprise ending!
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