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Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 23

September 11, 2020 01:12PM
You are entitled to your opinion, and I respect that, but it feels a bit harsh to say the whole story is mostly Bingley bashing.

The original one-shot https://www.dwiggie.com/phorum/read.php?5,128504,128504#msg-128504 was written to answer the September 2019 challenge. https://www.dwiggie.com/phorum/read.php?4,128464,128464#msg-128464

If you scroll back to page 7 on the DWG board https://www.dwiggie.com/phorum/list.php?5,page=7, you can see the other stories from that challenge. When it came to the D&E meet, I decided to incorporate my October 2019 challenge story, how D&E met, with slight alterations to fit.

My original timeline had the Bingley's not being physically present in a scene until Darcy/Hurst arrived in Meryton. Since I am writing as I go, I have been able to let comments, from this site and the other I am posting on, affect the story. Numerous people wanted to see more of the Bingley's and they went from being the suspected antagonists to the main one pretty quickly. I have not deviated from my original idea for an apex of the story and I hope what ends up happening surprises you.

The original intention was to show how Hurst has grown and, to a lesser extent, both Darcy's. I know I got away from that a little bit, especially when the Sakville's arrived. If I publish, I will probably remove the whole week long London trip.

The character of Hurst has always intrigued me because Austen didn't give us many details other than he was fashionable and liked to eat, play cards, and drink. Was he the way he was before he married or did being with his in-laws so much change him?
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