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Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 21

August 26, 2020 08:30PM
*raises hand* Okay, wait. I do have two questions. Less rhetorical, though I don't know that they necessarily NEED an answer (maybe just something to consider if you plan on publishing at a later date).

1. Why did Bingley wait until they were in the carriage and pulling up to the assembly to tell Caroline that they wouldn't have guests at Netherfield? (I mean, I kind of know but ... timing, man. Timing.

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2. Was this sentence supposed to be closer to the end? "She was ready to walk out of the hall and take the post home as soon as possible. This was going to be scandalous. Hopefully the gossip would not make its way to London." Where it is right now ... it doesn't make as much sense as it would if it were at the end of the chapter.
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Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 21

LizzySAugust 26, 2020 03:50PM

Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 21

BrigidAugust 26, 2020 08:30PM

Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 21

BrigidAugust 26, 2020 05:52PM

Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 21

Mari MAugust 27, 2020 03:23PM

Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 21

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