Dear Gaby: I have to confess that I was impatient and read the story as far as the archive takes it! It won't stop me reading it again in instalments and with the ending! I think you may want to do something with the ending as it is presently. An express is sent to tell the Bennets to stay in London and not to continue to Scotland. Why would they have gone South from Longbourn to London in order to go North to Scotland? perhaps you can invent a reason, or change it somewhat. Just thought you'd like to know...
