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Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 10

May 21, 2020 06:37PM
I can't even think of a word for how stupid Bingley is. I'm sure there is one. He totally deserved to be completely cut by both Hurst and Darcy, and immediately. Will we hear about the war council with Aunt Olivia in the next chapter or at least the aftermath? (Please? Pretty please?)

I do hope Alfie's training isn't needed. Meaning, I hope you don't work in a high-angst kidnapping scenario or anything. I like the idea of him learning to observe for other, more subtle signs of danger and maybe later exposing some sort of Miss Bingley plot. Ohhhh wait. *narrows eyes at author* Are you gonna have Alfred Dobbs try something, either with Grace or Aunt Phoebe? You didn't mention them after Hurst had them escorted from his house.

Which Bennet daughter will you pair with Hurst? Surely not Lydia. She's still very young. I think I'd like to see Jane with Hurst. Save Lydia for Bingley. (Unless maybe Jane would be the making of Bingley? I'd hate to see that kind of sacrifice, though. Maybe he wants someone like her but she prefers someone steadier, like Hurst. I'm sure you already have pairings in mind. I'm just throwing this out there. I'll accept whatever you decide.)

I'm sure there's plenty of foreshadowing in this chapter. I'm just not sure which way you're going with things.
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