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Re: A good cup of tea – September Short Story Topic – One Shot

October 01, 2019 01:46AM
Lovely! Really enjoyed this! Very well done! I would just say that it is best to start a new paragraph when you change who is speaking, and you had one paragraph which switched to at least 3 speakers or their thoughts, so you may want to separate them a little, as it does make it easier to follow the conversation. If I am out of line with that, do ignore me, please!!!

Other than that, bravo!!!
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