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Re: The Worst Day of Her Life : One Shot

September 15, 2018 08:29PM
Thank you for your comments! If I do expand this, I will be sure that I give more about who Elizabeth actually is, especially with this sort of Jane.

As it is, I tried to add details about who she is without having her take over Jane's thoughts much more than her other sisters. For such a short story, so many details had to be only seen in passing. I do think that having Jane remember her breaking someone's nose at a school dance was a pretty revealing anecdote, though! :-)
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