Bravo Jane! Nicely written. I could really feel for her awful day. And this is still the upstanding Jane that you’d want as your sister and defender.
Interesting take on Caroline- I forget that she has to be pretty smart to be so manipulative and to try and manage Charles and Darcy towards her own ends. The insights into her character from Jane’s tirade are really interesting and could make Caroline more redeemable. Caroline would be way more likeable if she had a cause to champion or an evil enemy to vanquish. The only person we don’t get that much insight into is Ellie.
Thank you!