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Re: Elizabeth Bennett and the Industrial Revolution pages 45-65

November 13, 2017 06:45PM
I was having trouble making the story evolve in an interesting way, and my prose was getting quite wooden. I'm going back changing a critical incident on page 49. Instead of having Georgiana fall into Aaron's arms I'm having Gretchen fall into Aaron's arms. That way Aaron and Gretchen have to deal with a strong attraction to each other despite Darcy's and Gretchen's engagement. This will make it more plausible for Darcy and Elizabeth to accept that fate requires that Darcy and Elizabeth be together at the end. The revised story will hopefully be ready a couple days, if i can keep my prose from becoming hopelessly wooden.
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Elizabeth Bennett and the Industrial Revolution pages 45-65

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