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Re: More Justified In Acting Chapters 7-9 (Post 3)

October 11, 2017 09:30AM
A lovely story! Anne's diary and Frederick's reaction to it was very much in character: I liked to see his realization of his mistake in blaming her so completely and in not returning out of resentful pride. I liked that they were both moved to tears, and the happy outcome was soothing. Poor Elizabeth, I'm sorry for her to be saddled with this empty marriage and the humiliation by Mr. Elliot. Although, of course, she would not find living in spinsterhood any better.
On another note, I don't think it is necessary to distinguish JA's words with a different font color: it is rather jarring, especially where there are only half-sentences embedded in the text. Most readers will enjoy recognizing the canon paragraphs and their new context on their own. I think to make an author's note giving the tribute to JA in a general way is enough.
Thank you, and I'll look forward to see more of your writing!
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MorganAOctober 07, 2017 03:36PM

lovely!

TashaOctober 16, 2017 11:50AM

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