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Re: The Secret Life of Caroline Bingley - Part One Chapt 4 - 8

July 29, 2017 10:04PM
Lucy can't be both the youngest and the second oldest, unless there are only two children, but then Lucy would be referred to as "the younger daughter."

"Lucy was Mrs. McCaffery’s youngest and had already been given permission to visit at the first opportunity."


"Going so far as to send off her second oldest daughter, Lucy to look after her as her lady’s maid."

I would enjoy the story a lot more if you did get a proofreader. There are many other blips, typos, errors, whatever you'd like to call them. However, the plot is interesting, so I will keep reading!
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The Secret Life of Caroline Bingley - Part One Chapt 4 - 8

HCIngramJuly 29, 2017 02:13PM

Re: The Secret Life of Caroline Bingley - Part One Chapt 4 - 8

AlidaJuly 29, 2017 10:04PM

Re: The Secret Life of Caroline Bingley - Part One Chapt 4 - 8

Maria VJuly 29, 2017 07:29PM



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