Thanks for the hint about Ms. I do actually know that but I'm sure I've made many similar mistakes. (Eventually, I would like to work with an editor on the titling in general - as well as some other structural edits, but for now can only do my best. It's been a while since I've been to the UK. But it is where the story took me, and I've always believed in following the story. I've done my best to research it - but there are gaps/inaccuracies there as well. I have asked a handful of Scottish friends for feedback with mixed results. Kindly meant suggestions are always welcome.