I enjoyed this so much! And I chuckled when I realized that she called him "Jonathan" like she was expecting someone else(her lover!) to tease him!!
Great job on Darcy's meeting with Elizabeth at the Gardiner's home; I thought his open use of his written notes and explanations were very well done and showed E so much more of him that it was not surprising at all that she could move forward from her dislike to actually accepting his proposal. It certainly was very brave of him to go ahead to speak with her after finding out how she really felt about him.
Lovely story. Thank you so very much!