A few things: (a) not my best work, but (b) I don't care, because (c) hex-fecta!
I'm all for proper pacing, so I'd be willing to keep this on ice until December comes around next year, slowly tinkering with it as my brain works out improvements EXCEPT this completes my DWG mission. When I started posting, I gave myself the goal of writing something for each of JA's 6 published novels. This little ditty for S&S achieves my hex-fecta! (Seriously, though, there's a better name for this, right? What do other people call it?)
Now I may honorably retire with a proud sense of achievement. Not that I necessarily will, but I could.