Thank you! Another reader emailed me offline about Elizabeth's 'sudden realization of her guilt.' It will be outlined later, but it is an excellent point. Those who
have read book 1, have an inkling about why she would conclude she is guilty. Those, like you, who are unfamiliar with book 1 are clueless.
Let's park the question for now. When you encounter the section where E ticks off her guilt in her mind in ch 13, let's revisit this question. Then you can tell me if NOT knowing heightens the suspense or merely leaves you frustratingly clueless, in which case I should add at LEAST a few hints in this beginning part of the book.
Thank you for the feedback on 'fag'! It seems consensus is leave it out so as to be 'better safe than sorry.'
