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Re: Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 3-4

AriadneO
November 07, 2016 02:18PM
I'm really enjoying your story, Ginger! I was off the boards when you were posting the first book, and since you are looking for feedback about whether this works as a standalone story, I will resist the urge to go and read it all now. I think so far I'm able to follow along, or at least I think I'm following! It was a bit frustrating when Elizabeth wrote down her actions and suddenly seemed to realize how she could appear guilty of treason - not knowing the backstory, it's hard to decide if the sudden realization makes sense or she had previously just been incredibly oblivious - but it feels like I'm just reading a mystery, so I'm willing to be patient and assume all will be revealed in time. I do hope all will be revealed!

Your writing has been lots of fun to read. I love the way you write action and the way you've paced the story and all the bits of history sprinkled in. I definitely feel like I'm watching something unfold in WWI. I can't wait to read more.

Btw, in the previous section, you asked about using "fag" for cigarette. I didn't blink twice when I saw it in the story, but I also don't think it would detract if you didn't use it, so I'd recommend avoiding the word.
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Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 3-4

GingerNovember 06, 2016 04:41PM

Re: Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 3-4

EvelynJeanNovember 09, 2016 06:31AM

Thanks! (nfm)

GingerNovember 09, 2016 03:12PM

Re: Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 3-4

Renee BNovember 08, 2016 01:44AM

Re: Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 3-4

SabineC.November 08, 2016 08:34AM

Witch hunt

GingerNovember 08, 2016 12:37PM

Re: Witch hunt

SabineC.November 08, 2016 04:32PM

Re: Witch hunt

EvelynJeanNovember 09, 2016 06:30AM

Re: Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 3-4

GretchenNovember 07, 2016 04:34PM

Re: Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 3-4

GingerNovember 07, 2016 04:38PM

Re: Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 3-4

GretchenNovember 08, 2016 04:32PM

Re: Darcy's Hope at Donwell Abbey, A WW1 P&P Companion Ch 3-4

AriadneONovember 07, 2016 02:18PM

E's "sudden realisation of guilt."

GingerNovember 07, 2016 02:32PM



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