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Correction Request-and Comments

September 27, 2016 02:20AM
First off, the corrections (HUGE thanks to Lily for the Italian phrases! smiling smiley )

1). This was her, Will's great-great grandmother.
Correct line: "This was her, Will's great grandmother. "

2). In October they were matched with a child in an orphanage. (oops...)
Correct line: In August they were matched with a child in an orphanage.

And now for the Italian:
3). "Elisabetta, Fitzwilliam! Eliabetta, I see you have had your baby. How many bambinos is it, four?"
Correct line: "Elisabetta, Fitzwilliam! Elisabetta, I see you have had your baby. How many bambinis is it, four?"

4).Tua sorella ama musicisti?
Correct line: "A sua sorella piacciono i musicisti?"

5). Le piace questo musicista, si,
Correct line: "Le piace questo musicista, sì"

Thank you archiver/moderator! And thank you, Lily!

And now, the comments:
Lily, I so enjoyed your comment! smiling smiley Thank you for sharing all of your thoughts, and I'm so happy to read that you enjoyed Tye and Georgie's dinner with Will and Elizabeth winking smiley I am sorry I wasn't able to write the actual date scene for Tye and Georgie! winking smiley Honestly, I just barely squeezed in enough time to write that last scene, so it was more of a time situation than knowing what happened next. The way you imagined it going--with the proposal at the end--is exactly how I imagined it too. So just assume Tye's proposal is what happened winking smiley
Susanne: Thank you, Susanne! smiling smiley Good luck with posting your new story, I'm sure it will be amazing winking smiley It was so nice to see you active here and posting chapters again at the same time I popped back to briefly post winking smiley
Karentea: Thank you for asking for the scene, I was so happy that you enjoyed it! smiling smiley
Margaret: Oh, thanks for reading! smiling smiley
Shannon K: I had so much fun writing Elizabeth and Will's little family, I'm so glad you liked it! smiling smiley
And JanetR: I feel like it is? (but it's always possible, sometime in the future, I might feel inspired to write another scene--I've done that twice now, haha. winking smiley But I'll say yes for now winking smiley )

Thank you so much for enjoying these characters and their journey with me!
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Comments and some Italian

LilySeptember 26, 2016 06:20PM

Correction Request-and Comments

BernadetteESeptember 27, 2016 02:20AM

Last correction...

LilySeptember 27, 2016 12:49PM

Last Correction Request

BernadetteESeptember 28, 2016 12:56AM

Belated, but corrected. (nfm)

Amy I.October 31, 2016 12:50AM

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