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Re: Mr. Darcy’s P&P POV (the abridged version) – Part 9

June 23, 2015 08:18AM
Lucky footman, to be in the right place at the right time, point in the right direction, and get a raise smiling smiley.

I like how often Darcy's thoughts mirror Elizabeth's ("certainly she had not met me with composure," etc.). I also really like that his pride hasn't just magically vanished, that he has to (and does) check himself every so often. So often we writers make him change too easily, or have an outside source (Elizabeth, Colonel Fitzwilliam, or whoever) correct him throughout the process, both of which undercut the labor he puts into addressing his faults.

It's painful to see him so hopeful, knowing what is coming...
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Mr. Darcy’s P&P POV (the abridged version) – Part 9

Jack C.June 19, 2015 03:30PM

Re: Mr. Darcy’s P&P POV (the abridged version) – Part 9

Shannon KJune 23, 2015 08:18AM

Re: Mr. Darcy’s P&P POV (the abridged version) – Part 9

Jack C.June 23, 2015 02:18PM

Oooops!

KarenteaJune 21, 2015 06:36PM

I don't think that Lizzy would be happy if Darcy does that ;-) (nfm)

GracielaJune 23, 2015 12:32AM

Well, he is hard on himself. (nfm)

Jack C.June 23, 2015 02:19PM

LOL! nfm

KarenteaJune 23, 2015 06:08PM

Re: Mr. Darcy’s P&P POV (the abridged version) – Part 9

ShannaGJune 19, 2015 06:14PM



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