Thanks. I wrote that in one sitting while I was getting over the 'flu - the image of Elizabeth collapsing in tears came to me and I needed something to do other than watch TV. I realized after the fact that I used a lot of some other story, but I couldn't remember what it was to give attribution - someone in a comment recognized it and told me. Anyway, the story ended where my "vision" of it stopped (and my hands were getting tired, too). To be honest, I've often wondered what happened to her.
I'm pretty sure she didn't wind up with Darcy, though.
