A blurb like that has a tendency toward a trajedy.
A while back, I wrote and finished a story,
Jane and Elizabeth's Paranormal Journey, that did not quite fit the blurb. In the middle, I think my story floundered, because I did not even have the complete story plotted out. Still, I think I had a novel way of resolving Jane and Elizabeth's situation! If I would have wrapped it up, it may have been read and remarked. However and for being a
Babylon 5 fan, I tend to press on to tragedies.
FYI, parts 1, 3, 4, and 5 are on the DWG writers page 5 and part 2 is on page 6. They were written and posted in April. The hosts are a little behind posting to the Fantasia Gallery, and I do not know how to give them any useful help.
"The avalanche has started. It is too late for the pebbles to vote." -Ambassador Kosh Naranek