I have repaired, renamed, and reposted the first part of five to my P&P Time Slip story's post. Part of the fix was to break the original that must have been too close to the board software's maximum post sizing. The first, A - part, has the content through the "Preface" while the B-part has chapter One. The new title is
JANE AND ELIZABETH'S PARANORMAL JOURNEY and as I understand, it will be tagged "P&P" in the "Fantasia Gallery"'s indexing with my blub.
Moderator/Archivist: The original post in;
http://www.dwiggie.com/phorum/read.php?5,115239,115239#msg-115239
is no longer part of the story.
I fancy that the fix is now easier to read. Since the early part has had many edit passes, I made few changes, but did consider and apply much of the just considerated observations. As much as I am tempted, I ought let a few days pass before I post the third of the five parts.
Enjoy, and keep up the feed back! This is my first try at putting forth a story, so I had to learn some of the basic mechanics. Also, I know I need all the help and forbearance I can beg.
Thank you.
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