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Next you must show us a pic of you wearing it! Good job, Shem! I would be hard pressed to sew a handkerchief. I truly appreciate what others can do in the seamstress department. ;)by Teg - Tea Room
This is one time I recognised the clue as one of my stories. :D Hereby Teg - Tea Room
Please consider that Jim did the courtesy of consulting the administrators of DWG before he began posting his story, to ensure that the content kept within DWG's PG-13 guidelines. While the subject matter is very serious, we feel that he has handled it respectfully and any concerns of ours were addressed.by Teg - Tea Room
No need to interfere. I'm sure Julia will be paranoid enough to consider this woman might be one of the death squad if not ED herself. :) Interesting developments on the personal front. A widower, eh? With a prying, insistent MiL. Heh!by Teg - A Novel Idea
Yep. Sergio was really getting into this playacting! I laughed when he asked if she was an alien. :D I agree. Give her a fake letter and send her on her way. See if she comes back a second time when she hears that the letter is still out there somewhere. lolby Teg - A Novel Idea
Congratulations Crysty! How delightful that you could share such a special day together! :) T...by Teg - Tea Room
... on internet lingo. lol Of course the notepad this lady pulled from her bag would have a P&P theme, would it not? Maybe the paper itself is watermarked with a pretty image of Lyme Park ...um ...Pemberley. Those women must not have husbands or significant male friends if they didn't know that some men consider Jennifer Ehle to be hot. :)by Teg - A Novel Idea
I didn't see this until now! Binky. lol Did Sergio notice how fit she was when they showered? Heh!by Teg - A Novel Idea
Here's a few to choose from. :) "If you mean Darcy," cried her brother, "he may go to bed, if he chuses, before it begins -- but as for the ball, it is quite a settled thing; and as soon as Nicholls has made white soup enough, I shall send round my cards." The next variation which their visit afforded was produced by the entrance of servants with cold meat, cake, and a variety of all the fineby Teg - Tea Room
Canadian spelling! It should be the same as British. :D Sounds like Elizabeth D'Arcy set up a scavenger hunt to disguise her real goal and fooled the fangirls into doing her dirty work.by Teg - A Novel Idea
Float my boat means you're not into that particular thing. ;) Oh my but a lot of the descriptions will hit home with some people. lol! But as the Professor says, every field has its fanatics. I did laugh at 'Darcy going at it six times a day'. Pfft!by Teg - A Novel Idea
CWAP! Does she point out in her speeches that shy and proud are not mutually exclusive? Oh, sorry. I digress. I'm glad so many can't tell the difference between American and Canadian accents. That means the Canuck CWAP members will not be suspects. :Dby Teg - A Novel Idea
My favourite line in the chapter. :) "Online." Then they were freaks, all of them.by Teg - A Novel Idea
If I'm struggling to get through a scene that is just not cooperating I will sometimes write a different one further ahead in the story, one that I've already envisioned and worked through in my head. I prefer to write chronologically but occasionally that doesn't happen. Another strategy is to walk away from the computer and take my notebook outside. I can continue a scene with just a coupleby Teg - Tea Room
Dawn R has a number of them in the archives. These are a few that feature Jane and Bingley as the primary characters. Dreamweaver Between Hope and Guilt Janeby Teg - Tea Room
Interesting! I do hope Lydia doesn't suffer a delusion that Darcy is as deceitful as her own husband. lol She's in for a rude awakening.by Teg - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Welcome to DWG! I see that you are fairly new here. Thank you for leaving feedback for one our authors, but (for future replies) please take a moment to review our Contributor Guidelines which asks that people use real names when providing feedback. It makes for a friendlier community atmosphere. Thanks! Teg... :)by Teg - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Hi! Thank you for leaving feedback for one our authors, but (for future replies) please take a moment to review our Contributor Guidelines which asks that people use real names when providing feedback. Thanks! Teg... :)by Teg - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
I enjoyed reading your comments, Charlie. Excellent points, but I dare not speak for the author's choices or directions. Nor do I have time at the moment, unfortunately, for more than a few sentences here. Your questions and suggestions for them, however, do make for some fine plot bunnies for anyone else to pick up on. :)by Teg - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
The tale is far more than just a woman in an abusive marriage, as there really aren't such nasty details as a modern story would supply. Of course, I know that you know that already. :) I do love how it begins as a man telling a story and then becomes the woman's story being related by a man.. all by a female author of the time! Quite a radical approach. :D Anyway, late to the thread but kudosby Teg - Tea Room
I had to digest this before leaving a comment. This Darcy maintains his dignity 99% of the time when his emotions are highly engaged. From my pov, he was livid with his aunt, yet controlled his temper and even restrained his comments to her. At the same time I believe he was hurt by Lady C's words and actions. Of course he expected disapproval of his choice of wife, even expected rejection toby Teg - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
That's all I have to say on the subject. :) I believe you have presented it very clearly and succinctly in this message and in your story. I'm enjoying reading the different journey these characters are taking as a result of Elizabeth's decision to first think about Darcy's offer and then say yes.by Teg - Tea Room
If only Lydia could be quelled by one of Darcy's 'looks'. lol! I am suspecting something to occur with Wickham, of course. Darcy will have to be on his toes, and less distracted by his lady love, to keep his old friend from creating havoc, not to mention scandal and distress. Darcy not distracted by Lizzy's proximity??? Impossible!by Teg - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
I do so enjoy this story AND your writing. Such lovely expressions (I'm not talking about only Darcy's compliments and heartfelt endearments) and it flows so easily. At this rate Darcy will be sufficiently enlightened by the time he next meets Mrs. Bennet that he may view her differently, and contemplate the future relationship in a different light. This Darcy is receiving a much softer lessonby Teg - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Your archiver could make corrections before saving this if you let her know how it should be changed. Some virtual chocolates might not go amiss, either. ;)by Teg - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
A wonderful achievement! And I love your cheering section, too. :)by Teg - Tea Room