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Though I don’t comment every chapter, I want to let you know that I am enjoying this story so much! I love the misunderstandings and lack of (or over in Mrs Benette's case! :D) communications in it. Everyone should find their own lesson learnt after all this. But I honestly think that these misunderstandings have been a blessing in disguise, had not Darcy been mistaken as a steward by Elizabeth,by Alison - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Another lovely deviation from ABF! I love this new version, Bernadette! To be honest, I was attracted to ABF when you first published it because of Emma and Knightley. My love for the pairing drew me to the first chapter of ABF and I became a fan of your beautiful writing ever since. But I love how you’ve changed the story and the characters and how you’re drawing the readers into it. Your sby Alison - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Thank ypu, Bernadette, for such a beautiful chapter! And thank you for a chapter with so much Emma and Goerge! :) Scenes with this pairing don't come often, and your Emma and George are always charming and wonderful. It's the friendship between this pairing that I find romantic love at its best, and to have a story (at leat part of it) bringing it out so beautifully is a very rare, rare treat!by Alison - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
It's so good to see you back, Bernadette! I'm looking forward to reading more of your beautiful story! :)by Alison - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Congratulations, Sarah! So much exciting publishing and writing news! :)by Alison - Tea Room
As for me, I never wrote a single story until three years ago. I started to write because I was grieving... not for the death of a loved one... but for the loss of my identity, it was a tremendously stressful time of my life, a very dark time. By impulse, I started putting an idea on paper (electronic that is) and then a paragraph, then a short story. I needed an escape, a way out for my heavilyby Alison - Tea Room
Love your premise, so refreshing and promising. Many places in this chapter made me giggle. And your excellent writing flows so nicely and draws me into the scene and the characters' thoughts so well. Thank you for the new chapter, definitely looking forward to next week's installment! :)by Alison - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Hi Sarah, I'm so sorry to learn that your mum has been very ill! I sincerely hope that she's doing better, and that as the weather eventually turns warmer things will be brighter for her and you and every one in your family! Take care and take your time to write! Sincerely, Alisonby Alison - Tea Room
Kids are the funnies and cutest creatures from Above! Thanks for sharing! :)by Alison - Tea Room
What beautiful, beautiful piece! Thank you! :)by Alison - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Thank you, Gloria, for bringing this up and expressing your opinion, which, I am sure, is shared by many many others! :)by Alison - Tea Room