LauraN Wrote:
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> Ugh!! You are so amazing to make me feel such
> contradictory feelings about this story! I love
> every bit of this tale, but I HATED Darcy's last
> line in this chapter. It must be my modern
> sensibilities, but it grated on my every nerve
> that he said she BELONGED to him. Grrrrrr!! >_< I
> am trying very hard to keep the time period in
> mind. Anyways, thanks for continuing to share your
> story with us!I agree. I thought she was going to say, "Yes, master," when he told her not to forget that she belonged to him. As if anyone can ever "belong" to another.
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