February 19, 2012 07:20PM | |
Marie H Wrote:
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> Again, a beautifully written and thought out
> chapter. I hope you'll accept just 3 small points,
> again, because your story is so good that it's a
> shame to have even minor errors.
>
>
> Oh dear, I've been an English teacher forever, and, other than "dint," which was probably a typo, didn't mind her word choice at all. What I particularly admire, though, is that while Elizabeth had the brilliant answer to Miss Bingley that we all wish we would have thought of on the spot, it was Suzanne who really came up with it. Well done!
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| Suzanne O | February 16, 2012 10:23AM |
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| Vita | February 17, 2012 06:10AM |
| Sonja | February 17, 2012 04:40AM |
| Marie H | February 17, 2012 02:57AM |
| Susan W | February 19, 2012 07:20PM |
| Suzanne O | February 17, 2012 03:42AM |
| Margaret F | February 19, 2012 05:39AM |
| Marie H | February 17, 2012 10:39PM |
| Jessica W | February 17, 2012 06:18PM |
| Angelie | February 17, 2012 02:25AM |
| MikeB | February 17, 2012 02:20AM |
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| Lisa | February 17, 2012 02:27AM |
| Suzanne O | February 17, 2012 01:04AM |
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